No problem haha let's just say that I was forged in the fires of reddit; I've had much, much worse. All I can do is be better. What can I say? I made a thing with these lyrics and I think it's a funny song, and regardless of the hostility, I'm proud of it. Thanks!
A little bit of (hopefully) constructive input if you didn't already know:
Suno respects the format of your lyrics. You can structure them into semantic verses and even prefix them with instructive "tags". Doing a quick search, I found no real documentation, but I think this article gives a bit of insight.
You could try making a bit more structured song out of it, if you wanna. It might sound even better when suno knows where to add pauses and stuff. I'm really impressed by what that thing can do with just a few lines of text.
I've dabbled with [intro] [vocals] [end] but I didn't realize there was more to it, so thank you for this input, I'm going to look it over. I tried using those tags and did get a somewhat full song that I really like but if there's more it can so, I'm all for learning.
https://suno.com/song/ef543edf-531a-4e40-8af6-c07f2dac02a3
Eh, no thanks. I've tried these things and I physically can't do it. I'm proud of my lyrics, I think that's genuine enough for me, and it's fun to do. Don't have a musical bone in my body, mate. It's cool that you don't want to listen, but I like it. Have a nice day!