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What happened to using punctuation?
Sells the joke better. If you split the sentence into clauses, using commas, then you give the brain a little rest and it would get to the punchline before you read it.
Reads like the chaotic stream of consciousness of a four year old
Who cares if its legible? Why not message who ever wrote it originally and ask them?
Had to read twice and go a few steps back every now and then
Maybe I got lucky for once.
"Who cares if its legible" set my brain up to expect satire and I failed to properly interpret the rest of the sentence it to think message weren't a verb but noun.
Yet your grammar is fantastic…
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