Request: Please have look over my First World I'm building for DM'ing

Hi all this is my first attempt at building a world so please be gentle.

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Craven Scar
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1i2c8ClRz8jUYlQfik7CzVyhY-i70wKbR/view?usp=drivesdk
• Starting location
• On the Eastern main continent of the western county of Idensor, neighboured by Dwarven county of Severiel to north
-The country of Idensor was once home to many magical beings such as fey, elves& monsters alike.
Forests are well known in this country& where Humans have set up town's& cities it is often a safe place to stay... or is it.
History Of Craven Scar
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Idensor wasn't home to Human's 500 years ago, no at best it was home to the elves to the western coast and the fey to the southern forests.
On the advent of chaotic magic surge some 500 year's ago monster's & many magic users were overcome with incredible power's beyond their control.
Much of the civilizations were drastically effected, such as the Dwarven country of Seveviel, while the dwarves dug in & tried counter the surge, so did many creatures dig into what the dwarves forged.

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Driven by instinct to get away from the worlds laylines monster's also kept encroaching on dwarven cities & towns. The Fey scattered some going to other planes, other's seeking shelter of other settlements to the east and some other's embraced the surge, this group holds the surge forest.
Said forest is a magical forest that brings constant work for adventures. The elves of the west coast left this land & went to their ancestral home of The Thriwyr( purple western) where their strongest, smartest, most knowledgeable preside and is best defended. Human's 100 year's after the surge have been expanding & as such Idensor was a annexed by the kingdom of Boandra. While displeased by the human's taking over their territory in Idensor, the elves also took no claim to it either as their only true home is their ancestral home Thriwyr.
The Human's shortly forged a powerful alliance with the dwarven country Several, Both race's sharing a bond of helping those in need, it didn't take both countries long to stabilise their Countries.

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Starting the adventure:
Many adventures have been answer in the call raised by Burlong Timbering Inc for having guards as well as capable adventures to perform tasks and missions alike
Burlong Timbering has recently focused on lumber from the outskirts of the Surge forest. This being that the tree's regrow in a week & being of higher quality compared to similar tree's away from the surge forest.
The downside of this is the increased "activity" as Burlong employees call it, but to everyone else these are monster attacks.
20 miles short of Burlong Timberings Inc's latest encampment(# 28) traveller's, adventures, traders and alike rest at the crossroad taven, a popular resting spot before journeying on, this taven has grown with its own mini adventure's market & Cleric many of Burlong Timbering Inc's local employee's rest here when off shift.

You are resting at the haven, it's been a long week of travel,
the smell of cut timber wafts through the air as many of BTI's employee's are enjoying the taverns facilities given the latest
start of site# 28 timbering operations

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• Perception check
  DC16

1. Success you sense the vibrations aren't in sync with the people of the crossroads-Go to wisdom check
   • failure, you look around, feeling tired you feel unsettled
   but long travel has that effect.-Go to defend the tavern
   1 Wisdom check
   DC18
   • Success, your not called an adventurer for no good reason, you stand up& raise the alarm by yelling for everyone to arm's-Go to defend the taven+ defense's up
   • failure, you speak to the barman, he states he will investigate
   -Go to defend the taven-defense armed not active

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Defend the haven:
There is no mistaking in that's not human noise, in fact you hear someone say its Goblin.
• If Defences up; the barman flips a switch and inserts a key, suddenly your table flips and creates a corridor forcing the goblins to only come in 2 at a time
You notice foot holes to leap over the table into the corridor if you wanted, also their are gaps between the table's to cast/attack from.
• Defence's armed; you hear a switch activated as the barman runs out the door pocketing his keys
! What do the player's do,
• After 1 round ODM roll 2 D20's
First D20: Barman DC6( does barman survive)
Second D20 Does Barman kill a Goblin DC15
Goblin's:
? Is the defences up?
? Are the player's inside or out

• Motive; attack all BTIs employee's & anyone defending them aka wont instantly attack PC's

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•Cross Roads inside
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1i2k1NI5Y1Rm0RiuU1oWIzPnKgFPA3PKP/view?usp=drivesdk
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Crossroads Outside
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1i66X3uijXzdjmrj-JA4rLhQpJIOnLhQV/view?usp=drivesdk

Sorry for the bad formating in advance I started on kindle scribe and exported my hand writing to text and had quickly edit.