The Point -1.1
Next Chapter The mountains and hills just outside Camrose were still burning enough that licks of flame pierced the haze of dingy yellow smoke, and two moms with yoga pants, and doublewide stroller…
Solid first chapter. Lots of interest points. I'm excited to see how clever 'Bow will get with these characters.
P.S. I think I spotted a typo
Was she was conveying the wrong signals in moments like these?